Echos Of Us by breannebihari at Inkitt
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Echos Of Us

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Summary

Ten years ago, Elara Monroe left her small lakeside hometown believing Rowan Vale had chosen silence over her. Rowan spent those same ten years believing she walked away without looking back. Now, a mysterious letter has drawn them both back to the abandoned cabin where their love first began—and where it all fell apart. As old feelings reignite and long-buried memories surface, Elara and Rowan uncover a chilling truth: their breakup may not have been entirely their own. Missing letters, manipulated messages, and hidden records reveal that someone had been watching them for years… studying the strength of their bond while quietly tearing them apart. But no amount of distance, grief, or interference could erase what they meant to each other. Forced to confront the painful past they never truly escaped, Elara and Rowan must decide whether love is worth risking again—or whether some heartbreaks are too deep to survive twice. Set against the haunting beauty of a fog-covered lake and filled with aching emotion, buried secrets, and undeniable chemistry, Echoes of Us is a gripping second-chance romance about the people who never really let each other go… and the love that kept finding its way back home.

Status
Complete
Chapters
17
Rating
3.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 — The Inheritance

The letter didn’t look like it belonged in Elara Quinn’s life anymore.

It was heavy in a way paper shouldn’t be—cream-colored envelope, embossed seal, her full legal name printed across the front like it belonged to someone older, someone more settled, someone who didn’t still flinch when her hometown was mentioned out loud.

She sat on the edge of her bed in a half-unpacked apartment, camera bag still slung over the chair, dust from travel still clinging to her boots. Outside her window, Maple Ridge looked exactly the same as it had the day she left it.

That was the problem.

Nothing here changed. Not the town. Not the memories. Not the part of her that still remembered how to breathe when she thought about him.

Elara flipped the envelope over again, even though she already knew what it said.

LEGAL NOTICE OF CO-OWNERSHIP

HALE & QUINN PROPERTY HOLDINGS

Her stomach tightened.

“No,” she said out loud, like the paper might reconsider if she sounded firm enough.

It didn’t.

She tore it open.

The words inside blurred together for a second, not because she couldn’t read them, but because her body had already decided it didn’t want to process them.

You are hereby notified that you are a joint legal owner of the following property: Lakeside Cabin and adjoining land, Cedar Hollow Road…

Her breath stalled.

Lakeside Cabin.

No.

That place hadn’t existed in her life for ten years. Not legally. Not emotionally. Not even in the quiet corners of her thoughts she tried to keep locked.

And then the line that made everything go cold:

Co-owner: Rowan Hale.

Her fingers went numb.

The letter slipped slightly, but she caught it before it fell. Like letting it hit the floor would make it more real.

Rowan Hale.

Of course it was him.

Of course the universe still had a sense of humor she didn’t appreciate.

Elara stood so fast her chair scraped back. She paced the small apartment once, then twice, like motion could outrun memory.

It didn’t.

Because suddenly she wasn’t twenty-eight in a rented room in Maple Ridge.

She was seventeen again, barefoot on the dock, laughing too hard at something Rowan said. Sunlight in her hair. His hoodie around her shoulders even though it was too big and smelled like pine and lake water and him.

And then—

No.

She shut her eyes hard.

That part wasn’t allowed to come next.

Except it always did.

Her phone buzzed on the bed.

A number she didn’t recognize.

She almost didn’t answer.

Almost.

Then she did.

“Hello?”

A pause. Then a voice she hadn’t heard in ten years filled the room like it had never left.

“Don’t hang up.”

Elara’s hand tightened around the phone so hard her knuckles ached.

Rowan.

Of course.

Of course he would say that like he still had the right.

Her throat worked before sound came out.

“You don’t get to say that to me.”

Silence.

Then, quieter. Controlled. Too controlled.

“I know.”

That made it worse.

Because there was something in it. Something measured. Something restrained. Like he’d practiced saying it without feeling anything.

It made her want to throw the phone.

“What do you want?” she asked.

Another pause. Like he was choosing words carefully.

“I got the same notice you did.”

Her stomach dropped further, though she didn’t know there was further to drop.

“And?” she snapped.

“And,” he said, “we need to talk. In person.”

“No.”

Immediate. Automatic.

A breath on the other end.

“Elara—”

“Don’t,” she cut in. “Don’t say my name like that. Don’t—don’t act like we’re anything.”

“We’re legally tied to a property,” he said evenly. “That’s not nothing.”

“It is to me.”

That landed. She felt it in the silence that followed.

For a moment, neither of them spoke.

Then Rowan exhaled, slow.

“I’m coming to the cabin tomorrow.”

Elara’s grip tightened.

“You don’t get to decide that.”

“I already did,” he said quietly. “We need signatures. If we don’t resolve it, it goes into forced sale.”

A forced sale.

The cabin.

Her chest tightened.

That place wasn’t just property.

It was everything they were before they became whatever they were now.

“I’m not going,” she said.

“You already are,” he replied.

Click.

The line went dead.

Elara stared at the phone.

For a second, she didn’t move.

Then she laughed—sharp, disbelieving, almost hysterical.

“Unbelievable,” she whispered.

But her hands were shaking.

The road to Cedar Hollow hadn’t changed either.

That was the first thing Elara noticed as she drove.

Same trees leaning too close to the asphalt. Same bend where the lake flashed silver between branches. Same old sign half-hidden by overgrowth:

CEDAR HOLLOW

POPULATION: TOO SMALL TO MATTER

She tightened her grip on the steering wheel.

The closer she got, the more her body betrayed her.

Her chest felt tight. Her palms damp. Her thoughts fragmented into images she didn’t ask for.

Rowan’s hand brushing hers on purpose but pretending it was accidental.

Rowan laughing in the water, dragging her under with him until she came up sputtering and furious and laughing anyway.

Rowan’s voice saying, I’m not going anywhere.

Liars always sounded the most convincing when they believed themselves.

The cabin came into view as the road curved.

And everything inside her stopped.

It was smaller than she remembered.

Or maybe she was just bigger now. Older. Heavier with years that didn’t soften anything.

The lake stretched behind it like a held breath. Still. Dark. Watching.

The cabin itself looked wrong without them in it. Like a stage after the play ended, everything still in place but abandoned by meaning.

Elara parked without turning off the engine at first.

Her hands stayed on the wheel.

This is stupid, she thought.

This is so stupid.

She should turn around.

She should leave.

She should—

A second car pulled up behind her.

Her stomach dropped before she even looked.

She already knew.

She watched in the mirror as the driver’s door opened.

And then Rowan Hale stepped out into the afternoon air like he belonged to it.

Time didn’t soften him.

That was the first betrayal.

He looked taller than she remembered. Or maybe just more solid. Like life had stopped asking him to bend.

Dark jacket. Simple jeans. Hands in his pockets like he wasn’t sure what to do with them otherwise.

He looked at the cabin first.

Not her.

That stung more than she expected.

Then his eyes shifted.

And landed on her.

The world didn’t tilt dramatically.

It didn’t need to.

It just… tightened.

Like a rope pulled slowly until there was no slack left.

Elara opened her door.

Cold air hit her face immediately.

Rowan didn’t move closer yet.

Neither did she.

They just stood there.

Ten years collapsed into a single stretch of silence between them.

Finally, he spoke.

“Hi.”

That was it.

Just that.

Like they were strangers meeting at a grocery store instead of two people who had once known each other better than they knew themselves.

Elara let out a breath she didn’t realize she’d been holding.

“Don’t ‘hi’ me.”

Something flickered across his face—so fast she almost missed it.

Pain. Or recognition of it.

“Okay,” he said instead. “Then don’t pretend I’m not here.”

“I wasn’t pretending,” she said. “I was considering leaving.”

His gaze dropped briefly to her car.

“You didn’t.”

“Not yet.”

A beat.

Then he nodded once, like he accepted that.

The worst part was how calm he looked.

Like this wasn’t tearing anything open inside him.

Like she wasn’t either.

“You got the letter,” he said.

“Yes.”

“Good.”

“Good?” she echoed sharply. “That’s what you have to say?”

Rowan finally looked directly at her fully.

Up close, it was worse.

Because the familiarity wasn’t gone.

It was just buried under everything they’d survived since.

“We need to fix this,” he said. “We sell, split it, move on.”

Move on.

The phrase hit wrong.

Elara laughed once, without humor.

“You think it’s that simple?”

“I think it’s necessary.”

She stepped forward before she could stop herself.

“Ten years,” she said, voice tightening. “Ten years and that’s all you’ve got? Necessary?”

Something shifted in his expression.

“Don’t do this,” he said quietly.

“Do what?”

“This,” he said. “Whatever version of us you’re about to drag up.”

Her breath caught.

Us.

There it was.

Still alive in his vocabulary.

Still dangerous.

Elara shook her head, anger rising because if she didn’t feel that, she’d feel everything else.

“There is no ‘us,’ Rowan.”

A pause.

Then, softer than before:

“There used to be.”

That did it.

Something inside her cracked—not fully, but enough to hurt.

She looked away first.

Because if she didn’t, she might forget why she left.

Or worse—remember why she stayed as long as she did.

The wind moved across the lake behind them, brushing through the trees like a whisper that didn’t belong to either of them anymore.

Finally, Rowan spoke again.

“We’re not doing this here,” he said.

Elara snapped her eyes back to him.

“Doing what?”

“Fighting,” he said. “Rewriting history. Whatever this is.”

“I’m not rewriting anything,” she said sharply. “You don’t get to show up after ten years and act like I’m the problem in the room.”

“I didn’t say you were.”

“You didn’t have to.”

Silence again.

Longer this time.

Then Rowan looked past her toward the cabin.

“We go inside,” he said finally. “We sign what we need to sign. And we leave this place alone.”

Elara stared at him.

Something in her wanted to laugh.

Something else wanted to scream.

But most of her—

Most of her just felt tired.

Because standing here hurt in a way she didn’t have energy for anymore.

“Fine,” she said at last.

A pause.

Then she added, quieter:

“But don’t mistake that for peace.”

Rowan met her gaze again.

“I wouldn’t.”

And for the first time since he arrived, something unsteady passed between them.

Not closure.

Not forgiveness.

Something worse.

Recognition.

They walked toward the cabin together.

Not side by side.

Not together.

Just… toward the same locked door that had been waiting for both of them for ten years.

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