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MY TURN

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Summary

This is the story of Leana, of a girl from another planet, much familiar to Earth. According to the traditions of their planet, every young adult must stay atleast 4 years in the planet Earth to learn the survival skills. When it was her time, she was super excited and was expecting much from the adventure. But this adventure of her turns out to be a dangerous, deadly, and not welcoming. She gets trapped in a physic-serial killer’s trap and becomes a bait. Will she be able to return back to their own planet? Or will she be the food for the dangerous crimes in the planet Earth?

Status
4mo ago
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Introduction

(Narrator)

Have you ever wondered how there are planets in the universe with many galaxies including?

Many people strongly believe that there is nothing as a “multiuniverse thing”, but think before you answer….  . When the big bang happened many solid particles had been scattered by a much greater force; and as time passes by many planets, galaxies, asteroids etc are formed, but there might be a chance where this multiuniverse thing is real!!



And this story is really about a girl who is from the parallel universe that is somehow connected by an “asteroid in time” to the planet Earth—



It’s the year 2026 in Earth and the same in the planet “Curpus”. Everything in the Earth, starting from natural resources to continents, islands, air, water, hills, oceans and seas, volcanoes, birds, animals to humans of nearly 8 billion of people and counting are exactly same. But the mindset of people and their technologies differ really great.

The people are having a single chief for the total population. The continents are ruled by sub-chiefs of respective powers. The rules and people are very humble. Every single rule states “love everyone truly” and every single rule favours each tribe. Not a single war had been since there is a true acknowledgement of the time bridge formed connecting Curpus to Earth—


To put it to a simple sentence, “It is completely opposite to Earth!!” When I mean “completely” — people are also opposite, like… supernatural~ You know, like others than ghosts and halloween


People here have powers which divide them into tribes:

"Air" powered -breezers tribe

"Water"powered-aquafall tribe

"Fire"powered-coalfire tribe

And a special unpowered tribe ......

the chief's

The chief's rule the planet.They dont have any powers- "as to be said from the ancestrol time .....

And the girl leana is the grand and beloved daughter of the present  chief 's. "christopher"


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