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Wow

"I find it intriguing. I like it. I’m curious where that leads"

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Want More!!!

"I adore books or series that reveal character history as they go. Unraveling the mystery, wondering what exactly is going through the head of a lunatic. This story does just that. The writer makes you want to know more and fixate on every detail to see if you can answer just that, "Where is Tom?" "What did the dad do exactly?" If you find yourself in need of a classic mystery, horror that unweaves little by little and pulls you in with the threads, this story is exactly what you need. "

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"nice start ... keep writing... "

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