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All gods orphans

"Wow what a great story. This story takes the reader on a journey into a possible future. Like a do over if everyone could be freed of their baggage. Problem is who gets to determine what is right? Well written."

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"Can't put it down, great read"

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All Gods orphans

"This rang out so true that it’s scary loved the book"

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All God's Orphans

"I read this at the end of the first year of an international pandemic situation, in USA. Elements of the story feature harbingers of how an epic failover sorts out in its after effects, with the strong theme of a Dystopian scenario adding a backdrop to the confusion of the people. Five stars for the concept, the location settings, and the strength of characters. Four because I couldn't keep an accurate timeline going, and no valid cause of the origin of chaos was put forth directly, or explained. This storyline was intriguing with the denouement set at NORAD in Colorado, and I found it interesting that the Mormans were on site to defend Cheyenne Mountain. The author's final solution included elements of redemption on earth, cessation of violence, and a lot of hope for basic humanity. Well done, and thank you. "

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