Untitled chapter 1
Introduction/Prologue.
Excessive Kidnappings/Hi-jackings.
In the city of Las Vegas, a very vicious crime lord had risen. His name is Pablo Medina. He not only runs numerous casinos and night clubs, but he and his vicious syndicate make a fortune on the side by sending his men to hi-jack large tourist groups, robbing them, and raping the attractive women. Then the victims disappear...
…FOR GOOD
On the outside of a warehouse…
A bunch of offroad motor bikes, off road vehicles, and vans pull up to the scene. People start getting out of the vans, getting out of the offroad vehicles, and getting off their motor bikes.
A door is open.
Screaming and crying cheerleaders are forced to get out of the van at gunpoint. While being pushed towards an abandoned warehouse, a cheerleader trips and falls. A guy points a gun at that cheerleader saying, “GET UP! GET UP NOW!”
The cheerleader quickly gets up out of fear.
These cheerleaders have just been kidnapped while their bus was hi-jacked.
Inside of the warehouse…
Cheerleaders are FORCED into the warehouse while screaming and crying.
Pablo Medina, who’s a white Hispanic man in his mid (60′s), fires shots towards the ceiling, causing everyone to get quiet.
“SHUT UP!” Pablo shouts…
The tv screen shows the news…
People watch as the news reporter says, “A group of high school cheerleaders, who were on their way to a cheerleading competition in the city of Las Vegas, were reported missing last week, AND was reported to have never reached their destination. And still not a trace of them anywhere.”
On a different tv…
A different news reporter says, “Detectives are forced to wonder, ’Does the disappearance of these high school cheerleaders have connections with the disappearance of the dozens of tourist groups traveling to the City of Las Vegas by bus. As authorities continue to struggle to make sense of all this, I urge us all to pray for the madness to stop.”
Inside of an empty room of Pablo’s mansion; two weeks later...
A teenage girl, who is dressed up for a beauty pageant, shown from the shoulders up, is yelling in agony as a group of men hold her down. Carlos Medina, Hispanic male, age 22, starts ripping the girl’s clothes off. It’s obvious that he’s about to rape her.
A group of teenage girls sit tied up in chairs while struggling to get free. They all look scared.
Teenage girl’s scream continues to scream...
In the city of baker…
People walk about as cars pull into gas stations and stores, while some cars leave.
Inside of a café…
A news reporter in seen on a tv saying, “A bus of teenage beauty pageant girls, who were on their way to a beauty pageant and mysteriously turned up missing, were discovered in the middle of the desert while burned to death.”
People who are paying attention to the news look devastated.
The Broadcaster continues with, “Identical to the way the high school cheerleaders went missing two weeks prior. ...who were also discovered burned to death. Authorities and detectives have yet to make sense of everything. According to detectives, the kidnapped teenage female victims were all gang raped before being burned alive and robbed of their valuables. All parents of these teenage girls are far too devastated to speak to the press. However, all we can ask, is that each and all of us pray against this madness.”
One of the people who’s watching this news broadcast says to another man, “Geeze. Can’t even go to a cheerleading competition, OR a beauty pageant anymore.”
The man replies saying, “...Can’t even travel to Las Vegas by bus anymore.”
The first person shakes his head ‘NO’ and says, “I’d like to see them hi-jack a group of black belts on their way to a martial arts competition.”
The man says to the first person, “Someday soon they’ll hi-jack the wrong people.”
Hey! Your attention to worldbuilding is honestly incredible. Every part of the story feels purposeful and emotionally rich, and the depth of the lore makes it so easy to get completely immersed in your world. The latest chapter was amazing, and while reading it, I found myself coming up with a few ideas and theories about where the story might go I’d love to share them with you.