Intriguing

"I love the beginning of this story. It is dynamic, dangerous and a bit unsettling. Sheza is not the usual type of a hero in novels. She is something completely different and totally out of place. This is what makes this story that much more special. I was taken in by this story from the start. It absorbed me and made me read on. I hope that you will publish the rest of it soon and I am certainly intrigued enough to wait for the rest of the story and read it. I would only suggest that you do further editing and proofreading, to make your story more “complete”, so to speak."