What is your opinion?
Great thriller
"I'm absolutely in love with this story. I like how everything builds up and isn't just thrust at us at the very beginning. I also adore the relationship between Ian and Steve but cant help hoping it evolves into something deeper. They seem like good friends but i think Steve might like Ian more and Ian is either oblivious or doesn't really like him more than a friend. Abby is absolutely hilarious. I love the interactions between her and Steve. "Back to square one with a little rectangle in our circle" I lost it there. That was too funny! I can't wait to read more!"
Liked it very much
"This story starts off as a description of an ordinary day, but soon becomes very thrilling and dynamic. You have really nice narratives and I like how you portray your characters. Rather than introducing them yourself, you let them introduce themselves through their words and actions. Through these actions, I can find out a lot about the characters themselves, about their habits, feelings and features. I love this. It is a great trait of great authors. I love how you end the story with a cliffhanger and I am curious about what is going to happen next with Steve and Ian. I also love the husky. :)"
