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Bound Before Birth

"This is an amazing story. Eliza, an unassuming young village girl, is bound to marry the Crown Prince Chwezi before they ever met. She goes to the kingdom for training and soon finds that the Crown Prince is falling in love with her and she with him. But she feels torn between being married to the Crown Prince and eventually becoming the Queen and another world that she had no knowledge of until she meets a friend of the Crown Price, Charis, a spiritual man. She is given the Bible and after reading it, she is torn between her old gods and the true God of the Bible. She deeply loves Chwezi but wonders about her commitment to his gods. Conspiracies are also in the background, as an imposter claims to be a long lost son. In the end the choice is no longer hers to make. I have read all of the chapters but this is an ongoing story. More to come! "

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Bound Before Birth

"Bound Before Birth is a story of a village girl who is chosen before birth to be queen of a kingdom, however she feels torn between two worlds, she feels she has two assignments that she needs to choose from , the Crown prince Chwezi loves her so dearly and she is growing to learn to live him too , however her spiritual decisions seem to be pulling them apart. I loved the give away ceremony for princess Ruth it was such a colourful event. However in the background, their are conspiracies in the kingdom who are threatening the throne"

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Bound but not Beaten

"Beautiful but shy Eliza has spent her entire life believing she is destined to become queen and marry the future king, Chwezi from East Africa. Eliza wants to be obedient to her mother and the many gods that her culture worships. Yet she is not comfortable with her upcoming marriage. The silver necklace she wears seems to be warning her that she is about to make a grave mistake. How can she explain to her mother that she didn't want to become royalty? Meanwhile a wealthy young man on the other side of the world is haunted by recurring visions of a beautiful village girl bound by chains. As God convicts his heart, this man begins to believe that their lives are connected with an invisible line that no false god can break. So goes Charity Jud's delightful tale of fated mates that doesn't involve werewolf culture. The moon goddess doesn't act on the couple's love, but the actual God whose wisdom and power surpasses all human understanding. I also enjoyed the artwork that accompanies this story. Eliza is stunningly beautiful, but I can't wait to see pics of her true love interest or even the king for that matter. Hopefully those pics are coming. This is an inspirational and wholesome story for those who are tempted to give up on love. P.S. I know the Chapter Counter says zero, but I read at least three chapters and plan to read more. The counter resets itself when I go through back chapters for research. 🤦‍♀️"

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A Throne She Never Chose

"Bound Before Birth is the story of an ordinary girl whose fate traps her in a life she never chose. Destiny is forcing her to become a queen against her own will, reminding us that sometimes a throne and great power can feel more like a punishment than a blessing. And perhaps that's why a simple cottage can offer more peace than the grandest palace. The story beautifully explores politics and religious beliefs, where love, power, worship, and prophecy all collide. Eliza's journey is both heartwarming and emotional, making it easy to sympathize with her struggles. The author has done a wonderful job bringing her story to life, and the illustrations make each scene even more vivid and immersive."

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