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No, there's no way that's the end....!

"I got sucked in by the end. Oh my god, that was a hell of a rollercoaster, but I'm glad I stuck it out! The opening is slow, and at first I wasn't sure where it was set - at first I thought it was Europe, or Asia, so I was surprised to find it set in America! Michael drove me nuts, but in the best way possible. Mans holding all his cards to his chest. I noticed the disconnect between him and his wife immediately, but I'm glad they resolved it in the end, even if he wasn't honest. I still can't get over why he wouldn't just *tell* Roy about the paper. Roy felt like the kind of character that would have figured it out from that, honestly. That mystery woman though? Damn, she was something. Like a ghost in the machine. Getting past soldiers, slipping away unnoticed, her face being so distinct and yet no-one can fully remember. The Reddit stuff was a lot, I'm not gonna lie, but it felt like I was reading *real* Reddit threads you know? Definitely sucked me in, especially by the 4th prophecy. Started out as a curious "what the hell is going on" to a much more frantic "No! There's no way!" As the title says, I can't believe there's not more! Loved it! Good job man ✌️ "

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