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Slow start but REALLY GOOD

"It took 7 chapters before the story really got going; which is a really slow start. That being said once it got going I couldn’t put it down. I am very impressed with the storyline and genuinely impressed with the character development and depth of these characters so far. I definitely recommend this book even though it isn’t finished yet. "

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Sweet

"This story made light reading and was a great pass-time. Also, rather funny! Thank you for sharing"

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