The Story
The 3 Little Killers
Chapter 1: Vacation
Me and Jason are heading out for vacation. It's a HUGE hotel. Speaking of it, we heard that there's really sweet staff, specifically these 3 twin girls. Here’s some things about me
I’m 15 and I LOVE making bracelets, It’s all I do in my free time.. It might sound silly but you know, I think It’s a great way to relieve stress. Oh! I forgot to mention my name. I’m Ellie..
I get bullied, nobody thinks making bracelets is “cool.” Everybody just thinks it's a dumb hobby that kids grow out of at 10. But I guess I never grew out of it..
My apologies! Enough of me. Me and Jason are packing up, did I mention my name? I’m Ellie. Oh wait. Well, It’s time to leave! I cannot wait to arrive in Florida. I have never been there before and my 11 year old brother Jason has been dreaming about it. So I guess today's our chance! My mom has been there before, she loved it.. until she got into that car crash….
But today! We’re not thinking about that.
It’s gonna take around 8-12 hours, I live in Canada! I’ve only been to America twice to visit my grandmother who lives there.
9 hours later
Ellie: Jason! Jason! We’re here!
Jason: Ugh.. Ellie, you know I hate this..
Ellie: But look! It’s crazy..
Jason: Whoa.. LET’S GET TO THAT HOTEL ROOM!!
We arrived at the fanciest hotel in Florida.. Sweetness Hotel. And it's exactly what you think. 3 girls greet us. They are triplets, 1 is slightly taller than the others but they help us to our room. I saw the 2nd one grin but I’m not fully sure why…
Well, It’s hot here. It’s 97 degrees! We better get to the pool.
Jason: Yo Ellie you know where the pool is?
Ellie: How would I know Jason!??!
Jason: I’m gonna call up those triplets, not sure how 6 year old kids know more about this hotel than us, but I’m sure they can help.
Ellie: Where’s dad?
Jason: Getting groceries since we’re gonna be here for a while.
Ellie: Got it, I’m gonna go change.
Knock knock
Melly: Hello! I heard you needed help getting to the pool?
Jason: Uhh yeah..
Mary: Hahaha! Happens to a lot of new guests who come here from far, come follow us. We promise the most interesting hotel experience..
Missy: You betcha.
Ellie: Uhmm, Jason you think these kids are.. normal?
Jason: Oh shut up Ellie! You’re so dramatic! They aren’t even 8 years old yet. What could they possibly do?
Ellie: Well you know, they know a lot about this place. And you know, the hotel is.. huge.
Jason: “sigh” Good God Ellie.. Can you just chill for once. You always yap my ear off about your dumb bracelets and everything about your life! Sometimes I just wish you would…
How could he say that!? I have cared for him since he was born.. I do everything for him.. Just because I’m anxious for our safety doesn’t mean I’m crazy. Wait.. maybe I am crazy.. What could 6 year olds possibly do..? Maybe my brother is right..
Chapter 2: Doubts
Ellie: Hey Jason, sorry for being dramatic.. heh, you know how I could be!
Jason: Ugh I’m sorry too I guess. I just.. think you’re crazy sometimes
Ellie: Oh Jason, you sure are a different type of kid..
Jason: Same with you..
Melly: Alright guys, we’re almost at the pool! Let me introduce us. We’re triplets and we’re all 6 years old.
Jason: How do you work at a hotel at that age?! This doesn’t make sense at all.
Melly: That’s a secret, my name's Melly by the way. I’m the helpful sister. Then there Missy, the fun one is always entertaining. And Mary. She’s quiet.. more kept, more observing to the people around us.
Ellie: Oh my! Nice to meet you guys..
Mary: Well, I’ve been observant of you Ellie.. you don’t see, to trust us..
Ellie: Well! Of course I do.. heh! Why wouldn’t I?
Mary: Well I heard your little fight. Jason, thanks for defending me. And Ellie, you watch out..
Ellie: Well ok!
Jason: God! It’s been 10 minutes! Where the hell is this damn pool?!
Melly: Language there Jason!
Jason: You guys act like you’re 30.
Missy: Hehe not me!
Jason: You’re Missy right..? The “fun” one?
Missy: That’s right! I’m gonna make you have so much fun!
Ellie (in her mind): I do NOT trust these kids. I know they’re kids but 10 minutes to get to a pool? Why do they act so old? I need to find dad..
Missy: Ellie? Ellie?
Ellie: Huh!?
Missy: We’re here silly!
Ellie: Oh.. ok well thanks..
Mary: You’re welcome.. I’ll be observing you.. like what I always do..
Ellie: Jason, I seriously think they’re different. Not like me but.. in a bad way.
Jason: So what? The pool is far away and they chatted with us the entire time. They’re good hosts and you can’t handle it.
Ellie: That’s not the problem. The problem is that 6 year olds are “observing us” Who does that?!
Jason: Well I don’t know. But I am getting in that pool.
Ellie: Maybe I am thinking too hard. I doubt that they’re even planning anything. They are probably thinking about coloring in their rainbow unicorn coloring books..
Mary: Oh that one definitely knows what’s going on. Melly, Missy.. we’ve got another one..
Chapter 3: Jason’s Thoughts?
Ellie: I’m gonna take a break real quick Jason. Getting tired you know.
Jason: Got it.
Jason (mind): Well, you know. Maybe there is something up with those kids. Ugh! What am I saying? Why would I listen to my sister with adhd and anxiety. She overthinks all the time. God what is happening! Why is she getting in my head?
Melly: Jason! JASON!
Jason: WHAT IS IT MELLY!?
Melly: It’s 9pm. Time for you and Ellie to leave. It’s closing time.
Jason: …where’s the hotel room?
Melly: Nowhere now.
Jason: What do you mean…?
Jason: WHERE’S ELLIE?
Mary: You’ll just have to come with me.
Jason: I SHOULD’ VE KNOWN! YOU B_STARDS!
Missy: Chillout lil bro! We’re only 6! Stop swearing at us!
Jason: I CAN SAY WHAT I WANT..! Y-YOU’RE NOT NORMAL!
Missy: Come with me, I’ll bring you to your sister.
Jason: NO YOU MASSY OR-! MISSY! I DON’T CARE! BRING MY SISTER HERE NOW!
Mary: We got a crazy one. Grab 'em girls.
Melly: “Grins,” I’m on it Mary.
Jason: YOU B_TCHES! I’M GONNA—-
Melly: Night night Jay Jay.
Jason: Ellie! There you are! I’m scared.. I’m sorry sis I missed you!
Jason: Why do you keep saying my name..?
Ellie: Jason Jason!
Jason: AH- WHERE AM I?
Ellie: You were asleep. They punched you.
Jason: My God! My head! WHERE ARE THEY!?
Ellie: You should’ve listened to me..
Jason: I-I-I didn’t.. know.
Ellie: Well what do we do now?
Jason: I don’t know what the hell is happening..
Mary: Phase 2?
Melly and Missy: Phase 2.
Chapter 4: A Terrible Game
Jason: Got the chains, let’s roll..
Ellie: Oh no no no no! Heh this can’t be happening!
Jason: What is it now dumbo?
Ellie: Check this out.
Jason: “Since you 2 smarta-, smarties disrespected us. We’re gonna play a game. For your entire vacation you are stuck here. In the basement of the hotel. Not even our parents, the owners of this hotel, know about the basement. So don’t even TRY going to them. And we are gonna chase you. You have no base and we have knives. We are active all day and night so no matter what, we will always be right behind you.”
Ellie: J-Jason!
Jason: What?
Ellie: BEHIND YOU!
Jason: AH- SON OF A B_TCH!
Melly: Run slowly! Make it last..
Jason: This can’t be real. Mom’s Florida trips weren’t like this. What’s wrong with ours.. I wonder what dad’s thinking..
Ellie: JASON TURN RIGHT! THEY’RE LOSING US!
Jason (crashes): OW! SH_T!
Ellie (gasping): Oh my god! Wh-why is this happening.. Did I do something?
Jason: It’s me Ellie.. I never listened.. GOD AM I STUPID!
Ellie: You’re only 11. Don’t blame yourself..
Zane: WHERE ARE MY KIDS? THEY’VE BEEN GONE SINCE 1PM..
Hotel Worker: I’m sorry sir we haven’t-
Zane: I DON’T CARE ABOUT YOUR FU_KING EXCUSES! FIND MY KIDS NOW OR I’M CALLING THE COPS!
Jason (teary eyed): Oh my god.. that’s- that’s dad..
Ellie: I HATE THIS VACATION! THEY’RE SUPPOSED TO FUN.. TO TAKE A BREAK! ENJO-ENJOY LIFE! BUT THIS IS NOT A VACATION! THIS IS A NIGHTMARE!
Chapter 5: Zane’s Revenge
Zane: I NEED MY KIDS RIGHT NOW! I DEMAND YOU TELL ME WHERE THEY ARE!
Melly: We’re sorry to inform you but.. they ran away.
Zane: THEY’D NEVER DO SUCH A THING—HEH! THEY LOVE ME LIKE CRAZY. YOU STUPID KIDS ARE RESPONSIBLE IN THIS! I KNOW IT YOU LITTLE—
Mrs Jarl: WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST SAY ABOUT MY KIDS? THEY’RE 6 YEARS OLD THEY ARE NOT THE B WORD.
Mary: Mommy! He’s being mean..
Missy (teary eyed): Yeah.. Can you make him leave? Pleaseee!
Melly: “sigh” People like you don’t belong in our sweet hotel.
Zane: I DIDN’T- YOU- WHERE ARE MY KIDS!?
Melly: Goodbye, Zane. Good luck finding them.
I saw that girl grin! Th-the tall one. I need my kids back. I know they’re in on this. Jason and Ellie would never run away from me EVER! Or.. would they? No— they wouldn’t.. Heh! GOD SAVE ME!
Ellie: Jason, please don’t cry. We’re gonna get out.
Jason: It-It’s all my fault.. I chose this hotel, I didn’t trust you, I fell for their trap.. It’s all because of me..
Ellie: Jason! BEHIND YOU!
Jason: AGH! LEAVE US ALONE PLEASE WE’RE SORRY..!
Missy: Oh your sweet little daddy just got kicked out!
Melly: He thinks you ran away hehe!
Mary: He’ll never find you. If he comes back he gets the knife.
Chapter 6: The Message System
Jason: Ellie..
Ellie: …Yeah?
Jason: I think I have an idea. It might be hard but I think we can get out of here..
Ellie: How? We just have to survive these.. kids.
Jason: So when I was running from them, I saw a latch.. it has a keyhole but a slight crack.. Maybe we can send messages through it.
Ellie: With what paper?
Jason: RUN!
Melly: AHAHAHA! WE TOLD YOU! NEVER LET YOUR GUARD DOWN!
Jason: GO FASTER ELLIE! THEY’RE RIGHT BEHIND ME!
Ellie: I-I’M TRYING!
Mary: Let them run. They’ll pass out eventually.
Jason: WH-WHAT?
Everything went black, I don’t know how long I was out for but Ellie.. she wasn’t doing so good..
Jason: Ugh.. what happened..
Jason: ….Ellie?
Jason: ELLIE! YO-YOUR FACE!
Ellie: Huh? Oh..
Jason: Ellie.. I-I- I’M GONNA KILL THOSE GIRLS!
Missy: Not if I do first!
Jason: Wait-!
Jason: I BEG YOU! DON’T-!
Jason: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Mary: Maybe he’ll survive, but based on the injuries he might not make it.
Melly: Let’s get the older one next.
Ellie: YOU’RE NOT GETTING AWAY WITH THIS YOU-
Mary: Come on, let’s get her.
Ellie: I’LL COME BACK FOR YOU JASON! JUST DON’T DIE ON ME… PLEASE..
I ran and ran, I don’t know how long but I knew that if we were getting out of here alive, I’d have to run. I was in too much shock to realize what happened to Jason. I thought he was just knocked out..
Ellie: I think I lost them.. Wait, is that..?
Zane: I NEED TO SEE MY KIDS NOW!!!!!!!
Ellie: DAD! I’M IN THE BASEMENT LOOK THROUGH THE VENT!
Zane: Huh!? ELLIE! HONEY WHAT’S HAPPENING TO YOU!?
Ellie: THE 3 GIRLS CAPTURED US AND BROUGHT US HERE! PLEASE SAVE US!
Zane: I- Where’s Jason!?
Ellie: …. I think… he’s dead..
Zane: …..What?
Chapter 7: The Final
Zane: THEY- THEY KILLED HIM?
Ellie: I don’t know.. I couldn’t bear to see what happened to him. I- I heard him scream.
Mrs Jarl: Mr Yurelos, we already kicked you out. Since you decided to not follow the rules, you’re gonna have to survive with your daughter.
Missy: We tried Zane! But you didn’t listen…
Mary: Bring him in.
Zane: NOT IF I HIT YOU FIRST!
And with the quick hit of my fist, Mrs Jarl passed out cold.
Zane: WHO’S NEXT?
For once those little girls looked panicked. I never thought I’d be so happy to hurt people but I guess it was the heat of the moment, because I knocked out every staff member in that building.
Zane: IS THAT ALL OF THEM!?
Ellie: DAD! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Zane: SAVING YOU MY LOVE! I’M COMING TO FIND YOU!
Ellie: PLEASE HURRY! JASON ISN’T DOING SO GOOD!
It was probably only 20 minutes but it felt way longer. I had never felt like this but I found Ellie.. her face had scratches all over it.. her knees were covered in blood.. But my boy Jason.. There was a huge wound in his chest. I never thought I’d see my kids like this..
Zane: Jason.. I-
I started crying on the spot. No parent ever wants to see such a thing.
Ellie: Teary eyed- I’m sorry.. we should’ve never come here.. I HATE THOSE KIDS IM GOING TO—
Zane: Come on Ellie, we gotta get him to the hospital..
I grabbed Jason and we practically ran up to the main entrance, all the members of the hotel were on the ground and I was probably getting a heavy load of jail time. If it’s for my kids I’ll do anything.
We got Jason to the hospital, we weren’t sure if he was gonna make it..
Zane: Doctor! Please tell me how he is..
Doctor H: I’m sorry. I don’t think he’s gonna make it..
Not all stories have happy endings but we learned to move on. Jason lived 11 years and it was all because of 1 stupid vacation. My dad and I became closer. But our lives will never be the same. After mom was gone, Jason acted meaner, colder, and tougher. He spent the last 2 years of his life grieving his mom. Just for his own life to be taken away right after.