What is your opinion?
Wonderful
"I really enjoyed this book. Being a fire lover myself it really appealed. As did the way it’s beautifully written. With a gentleness my soul really appreciated. A softness. Thank for sharing your amazing creativity. "
Embers
"Good book. A little too direct for something dealing with string emotions still good"
Ottima base per un bellissimo libro
"L'idea è molto bella e anche lo stile di scrittura è adatto: sembra che abbia "bruciato" le parti di dialogo non essenziali. Purtroppo in diversi punti questa capacità di condensare sembra essere diventata quasi un riassunto. Peccato. Sarebbe bello leggere per esteso i combattimenti, approfondire qualche proprietà della magia del fuoco, magari qualche flashback di come la protagonista sia cresciuta alla fornace... Comunque bella storia, idea intrigante e trama ampia e coerente. "
Lyra's opening chapter hooked me instantly
"Great first chapter - Lyra's voice is grounded and sharp, and the conscription setup gives real stakes right away without over-explaining the world. The unopened letter and the fire-touched detail are exactly the kind of quiet hooks that make me want to keep reading. Well done."
To factual, no emotions
"The story was good, however I found the story line and characters very cold, no depth to the story. No emotions, between characters .... Very factual, even though as mentioned the story was good. You need different emotions with the characters to pull u into a story.. "
