Back to Story
What is your opinion?
I loved every beat of it.
"Loved this story, wish it was longer but maybe that was intensional with the quality versus quantity theme? You did some really great character building, especially considering the length of the story, but I wish you would have spend more time on Jenna - maybe diving into why she likes airports so much or something. Total chefs kiss the way you described their intimacy 🤌 write a lengthy slow burn romance and I will be all over that 🙏"
The cost of every beat
"I have read this book on a different platform I loved this book very emotional and sad and interesting "
