Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Review

"Very good plot never read a story with 2 mates. What a day for that girl! I would have asked if the bond was done right away or if I needed to do something to make sure and then asked to be marked right after family night when she knew she liked them and their family interactions. Eagerly anticipating the next plot and how it will end, secretly hoping she will stay with mate no. Two. He was on board from the start and isn't such a little toddler like Wren. Keep writing ans be yourself. You have good instincts for story development and how to twist and move on and thank you for describing the characters so well I can a tally envision them."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I can't wait for next chapters.

"I like the plot the characters and the writing style. I recommend this to all my friends to read it."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The omegas heart

"It's a love story and that's my favorite. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The omegas heart

"Im loving the story and characters I'm hoping she finally feel loved and lets him in cannot wait for more please ty"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The Omega’s Heart

"I continue to be enthralled by this story! Annie’s life is changed for the better when she’s rescued from the guards from her own pack who were ordered to kill her. Her rescuer turns out to known as the most dangerous alpha from another pack. He comes to her rescue because he smells the distinct scent of his fated mate who he’s spent years trying to find without success. As the story line progresses they have a few difficulties related to his jealousy of Wren from her original pack. After he rejects her publicly because his father forces him to, she is devastated. Then his father, the alpha of the pack, orders Annie to be killed so Wren, his son, will be guaranteed to find another mate. After Annie is rescued, Wren decides he’ll go against his father’s wishes and go and get her from the other pack. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Storyline

"The only way I could do that was if you had to do a lot more work and then you would be done by yourself so you would be fine and then I could just go home to you if I needed "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation