Horrendous

"I do not know why but I feel like you are trying to make up something just for the sake of being creative when the complete opposite is being happening. Ofcourse writers make up stories but it had to come from inside so that readers can connect. I could not connect with a single sentence I tried. THere is no plot, no story, no writing skills whatsoever. Since this is your first time, so I should not be so negative, but next time try to write something that you can feel and that makes sense. This was utter garbage, load of shit, nothing else. There are a lot of people who go by this "search for something" niche and you did just exactly that. THere was nothing unique, special or creative about what you. Infact you made it seem like the best example of a story written a depressed human being who just wants to write for the sake of God knows what. First of all, you are a man, so stop being depressed. Men are not supposed to be depressed. Get up, pick yourself up, grow and learn and be strong and stop whining in your stories, you are a MAN. A man when in his best can take on the entire world. Do not be offended or the bs leftist logic that men can cry and can be depressed and have emotions too etc etc. Ofcourse they do but men knows how to deal with them, they dont cry or whine, they stood up."