What is your opinion?
"When Ice Meets Fire"
""A beautiful, refreshing cross-cultural romance where Tokyo’s icy discipline flawlessly collides with Jaipur’s fiery passion. An absolute must-read!""
Drama and realism needed author
"First of all a very good job author. The story is good but the thing is that it lacks drama. The story is going too smooth and peaceful to be true.In my opinion add dome drama , some misunderstandings and some arguments making their love hang dangerously then make a strong moment strengthing the bond. This will add the drama it lacks. The female character: i know you are trying to make her stong perfect and independent but she seems too perfect to be a human being. Like she is always liked by everyone always applauded. Im not telling you to make her fall completely. Make her humanly. Humans have weakness have weak spots, and fall apart at times they just recover smartly. Add a bit of spice some romance. Hath pakdne ke alava.make the male character mischievous and possessive. some engaging mysteries to be solved of the characters.Add some third wheels. Cause till now the story revolves 'only' around the two. And i actually don't like when Shivani says thank you to the make character so many times in the book. Mai galtiya nahi nikal rahi bas bata rahi hu ki agar drama add kiya to story engaging hogi. Agar ek he same smooth flow se chalogi toh story intersting nahi banegi. Bas itna he kehna tha"
