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Dunno

"Want to continue reading"

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good

"really interesting to see how story is developing. prefer more of character build up and creation "

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Very honest and personal

"The descriptions are amazing. I could really see myself walking through the streets and feel the atmosphere. Combination of thoughts and spoken word is very realistic. It sucks you into the situation without much effort. I could very easily connect with similar experiences in my life. Being in a relationship where I am the other man, when I'm single, for almost 10 years, I understood a lot of nuances presented in the novel. It's weird but I gained respect for her husband only after he was ok with the whole situation and this novel shed a new light on that. I do provide a service. I take her to parties because he doesn't like to party. I'm the fit and energetic while he provides comfort. Life is weird and full of surprises and if we are not open, we can miss on too much. Thank you for sharing."

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Good read

"i really like your novel. something you can work on is being more descriptive because sometimes I didn't understand what was happening."

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Immense lust

"The writer style is more like a conversation of two people who wish to experiment and get to discover themselves "

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to much pressure

"she doing such a bold things. hope she Don't be cheat with her husband. if something happens mean its her fault bcoz she wants Wild things. "

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