Keep Writing!
"Great Start, but you should keep writing. Let the pen flow on those papers! Also, you need to put the characters more well rounded"
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"Great Start, but you should keep writing. Let the pen flow on those papers! Also, you need to put the characters more well rounded"
"Hey there, sounds cool but I'm waiting for more. Please continue writing. :)"