A bit lost..

"I think this book has a lot of potential.. but I’m lost.. like in one chapter something happens but the next it happens again but in a different way.. as if you wrote a chapter then rewrote it but kept both. Then further down the line you say something about twins then after knowing it’s twins you then have an appointment about baby.. finding out it’s twins.. your story is a little jumbled and I found it hard to keep track. Great storyline.. just couldn’t follow it through..."