What is your opinion?
Blackwood
"I really like this book im enjoying this 1 i havnt stopped reading since I started"
The plot
"It's wonderful. Wonder what happened next.love the suspense though"
Claimed by my ex's brother
"I enjoy the tone of this story. "
Roman
"Okay I enjoyed the book but hate cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what next."
Immature writing
"I wouldn't recommend this to anyone yet. The writing is sophomoric. The plot so far is a series of 'oh, no' moments, no ups or downs. Occasionally a paragraph might have more than one sentence, like less than one percent of the time. There is no indication of who is speaking, and it doesn't follow a strict alternating paragraph scheme for conversation between two people, making it difficult to know who said what. The context is of very little help because there's not enough to really be context. I starting to believe that this was written by an AI that was trained mainly through the internet. I'll read some more because I can't seem to DNF stories even when they need to be. "
