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Sixth Sense meets night at the museum

"This us a charming and enjoyable read from start to finish. The characters are likeable snd realistic and compliment each other brilliantly. The story has a sixth sense vibe to it but more like a paranormal investigation. All characters have a lot of personallity, even the see through ones. There are clearly some actual experiences that form the backbone of the story and the little bits of information is a great touch. Can't wait for more."

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Ghosts at the Museum

"I love the whole tone of this story taking the idea of Ghosts and making it light and fun, with a few scares added in to the mix. The slow addition of each character is a great way of not overwhelming the reader and the interesting sidenotes explaining the origins of some of the characters was also really fun. Excellent so far, I look forward to further chapters 😁"

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"The prose in this has a real musicality to it. rhythm of the sentences matches the mood of each scene and it creates an reading experience that feels almost cinematic."

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"I am loving the story. It very engaging. Keep up the good work"

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Upbeat Ghosts

"I enjoyed the characters from young to older so far. Despite the paranormal being the reason they have come together they are bright and immersive. So far Kiki is my favorite character she brings a joy to a story about the after of death. Love how Laura refused accept proof right in front of her until she could no longer deny. The only hold I have was the chapters felt disjointed in the beginning. Other than that I look forward to reading the rest."

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