Inkitt
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My breath away

"​I completely fell in love with the gentle, deliberate pace of this story. There is a sweetness to the passing days that feels incredibly refreshing, even when elements of the outside world gently break the isolation. While the narrative is brief, the storytelling carries an eternal, timeless weight—as if it spans from the dawn of creation to the end of time. It deeply comforted and healed my heart. Thank you for sharing this true masterpiece."

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When time comes

"The first chapter was very telling. Mysterious, Beautiful, Flawless, poetic visuals. He caught me, leaving me wanting more. This journey will unfold slowly, seductive."

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