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Keeps me reading

"The struggle the three main characters endure is well written. It keeps me turning the pages and wanting to know the true mystery of Maeve."

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Amazing story!

"This is such an amazing story! I look forward to the updates every day!!"

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All the feelings

"It’s is a slow romance, with all the feelings. Before you know it you want to read more, know what will happen. I like it "

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Rejected by the alpha heir

"He needs to control kael if not he needs to go north to maeve 💔"

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Amazing, amazing book

"This book has been fantastic to read, since the bond started weakening, Finn was loosing control and then taking the shot and loosing kael I have been in tears reading the chapters. Knowing that the wolf of the south has finally reached home and reduces to me to blubbering mess I must say. I can’t wait to continue the journey of Finn and Maeve, I am praying they both survive this. What is Maeve and when will her Lycan come out or have I missed that somewhere? Thank you for allowing us to read this for free, your writing is fantastic, gripping and I’ll keep coming back. Xx"

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Good story

"Looking forward to the conclusion of the story. I need to know what Maeve is facing that is so bad and why the Lycian’s won’t explain it to her. "

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I love it

"The book is so compelling! I love the story 🥰"

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Entertaining

"This book is entertaining to read. I'm curious to read on and see what happens between Maeve, Finn and Dion. Hopefully they do not stretch the story too long where interest is lost. "

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Slow start

"I am looking forward to more plot development "

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Rejected by the alpha heir

"Really interesting book, I have enjoyed reading this so far. Great plot! "

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I need more

"I'm still crying."

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Rejected by the Alpha Heir

"I love this story. I usually just read these when I have some waiting time to kill. Would never choose a love triangle story. Dialog is kind of choppy, though very funny at times. Sometimes difficult to tell who is starting the conversation. A lot of repetitive sentences. But I love the characters and the dark humor. Look forward to the rest of the book."

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Rejected by the alpha heir

"Need to finish the book. Really good..keeps you suspended "

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Great story but.....

"Was really enjoying this story up to the last 4-5 chapters now it just seems to be on a repeating loop. Characters going through same emotions and actions they need to move on now and come to some conclusions. What's the danger supposedly on the horizon that nobody's saying about anymore, just constant training for the event. Poor Finn loosing his mind over and over again, end his suffering write him a happier ending. "

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Rejected by the Alpha Heir

"Wrap it up! Almost 1800 pages and it just keeps going."

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Rejected by the Alpha Heir

"This story is killing me. The suspense, the plot twist. This is confusing me a lot . Maeve, Dion and the Alpha Heir. Some times I think that they have reached an understanding but no there is still another drama. Anyways let me keep reading you never know that it might end well, qiao👌"

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I had to force myself to finish it

"The plot is a great plot. At least 1/3 of the book was just AI word fluff though. It was a bit aggravating how nothing substantial happened the entire middle of the book. Im glad she went back and hopefully she will stay there with Finn. I wish these writers on here would at least google how to tell their AI’s how to avoid AI clique writing. If there is a second book i don’t know if i can make myself go through the AI fluff again to bother reading it. Good plot, decent characters, just learn how to manipulate the AI. "

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Rejected by the alpha

"The story started promising but than she is with one mate and after goes to her choose mate and it keeps going on and on, with almost 300 chapters and is too repetitive, same lines same thing all over again, she doesn't even know yet why she's training with Lykans and I'm over of the story already. I started reading because I love rejected mates that find a second chance but she's practically with both of them and never decides. "

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Rejected by the alpha heir

"At this point I gave up completely on the story, the writer doesn't seem to care about all the complaints about the repetitive stuff, Finn is like the poor guy that gets sick all the time because of his poor decisions and she's the only one that can help him out just to leave him again so he get sick again, Dion is the dumb guy that gets the scratches from her and always say I KNOW* can she just have a fetal accident so they can find a decent mate, because this one is an excuse if a mate a cheater playing the innocent card all the time. "

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Great writer, tedious story

"Not a fan of where this was heading...you have great skills, but there are 3 different stories going in here. Such a shame because it could have actually been about a rejection and her own redemption with a guy that didn't choose for her. Too much repetition and some inconsistencies in characters, plot, and lycan and wolf similarities and differences. "

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