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Rejected by the alpha heir

"He needs to control kael if not he needs to go north to maeve 💔"

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Amazing, amazing book

"This book has been fantastic to read, since the bond started weakening and Finn was loosing control I have been in tears reading the chapters especially since he’s been in the reinforced room. I can’t wait to continue the journey of fun and Maeve, I am praying they both survive this. Thank you for allowing us to read this for free, your writing is fantastic, gripping and I’ll keep coming back. Xx"

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Good story

"Looking forward to the conclusion of the story. I need to know what Maeve is facing that is so bad and why the Lycian’s won’t explain it to her. "

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I love it

"The book is so compelling! I love the story 🥰"

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Entertaining

"This book is entertaining to read. I'm curious to read on and see what happens between Maeve, Finn and Dion. Hopefully they do not stretch the story too long where interest is lost. "

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Rejected by the Alpha Heir

"In love with the story, I have to admit that what is happening between Dion and Maeve is beautiful, Finn was too toxic for her, that pack was a sad past on her life, I hope that whatever happens next she ends up with Dion 😍"

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Slow start

"I am looking forward to more plot development "

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Rejected by the alpha heir

"Really interesting book, I have enjoyed reading this so far. Great plot! "

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I need more

"I'm still crying."

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Great story but.....

"Was really enjoying this story up to the last 4-5 chapters now it just seems to be on a repeating loop. Characters going through same emotions and actions they need to move on now and come to some conclusions. What's the danger supposedly on the horizon that nobody's saying about anymore, just constant training for the event. Poor Finn loosing his mind over and over again, end his suffering write him a happier ending. "

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I had to force myself to finish it

"The plot is a great plot. At least 1/3 of the book was just AI word fluff though. It was a bit aggravating how nothing substantial happened the entire middle of the book. Im glad she went back and hopefully she will stay there with Finn. I wish these writers on here would at least google how to tell their AI’s how to avoid AI clique writing. If there is a second book i don’t know if i can make myself go through the AI fluff again to bother reading it. Good plot, decent characters, just learn how to manipulate the AI. "

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