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I Love You [Revised] 🧸

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Summary

Sasha just wanted to hear her boyfriend say, "I love you." However, due to his work and busy schedule, they barely spoke — his presence becoming an absence — slowly tearing their relationship apart. Will Sasha stay strong? Will she continue to wait for him? Or, will Kevin learn to be more straightforward with his feelings?

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
4.8 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

The Way to Read This


HOW DO I READ THIS STORY?

Indicators

This story is written in a script format. To help you follow along, here’s a quick guide:

● [Box Brackets] – Narration, settings, and scene descriptions

● (Parentheses) – Character actions and expressions.

● Normal Text – Dialogue spoken by characters.

● Italicized Text – Character thoughts.

● Bold Italicized Text – Character monologues or inner reflections.

● Bold Text – Titles and important words for emphasis.

Scenes

This story is divided into Scenes to help readers follow the flow of events.

Each Scene indicates whether it takes place inside (INT) or outside (EXT), along with the time and location where the scene occurs.

Example: SCENE 1: EXT. Morning. At the park.

Further details about the setting, atmosphere, and actions are provided through narration enclosed in [Box Brackets] and character actions enclosed in (Parentheses).

That’s it! Enjoy reading. 🧸💜

Let J.A. Lark 🪶🍂 know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

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Love this

Funny

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Funny

Spicy

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Spicy

Suspenseful

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Suspenseful

Emotional

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Emotional

Profound

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Profound

Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

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Good Writing

Compelling Plot

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

author

Okayyy, I genuinely love how you started this! 🥹🧸💜 The introduction is actually so helpful and well-organized. The way you explained the script format before diving into the actual story makes everything feel much easier to understand, especially because every element—from narration and actions to dialogue and inner thoughts—has its own purpose.

I also really like that you didn't just throw readers into an unfamiliar format and expect them to figure everything out themselves. The little guide feels thoughtful and shows how much effort you put into making the reading experience smooth for everyone. ✨

And honestly? The script format makes me even more curious about the story! It already gives the feeling that this will play out like a movie or drama inside my head, where we can clearly imagine the characters' expressions, movements, and emotions. 🎬🥹

The scene indicators are also such a smart touch because they help readers visualize where and when everything is happening without getting confused.

Overall, this was such a creative and reader-friendly introduction! It may be short, but it successfully prepared me for the journey ahead. Now I'm really curious to meet the characters and see how Sasha and Kevin's story unfolds. 👀💜🧸

Let's gooo to the next chapter! ✨📖

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