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The Forgotten Iterations

"I am so bummed no one has noticed this amazing Sci-fi/fantasy story. The premise alone blows my mind! This writer's narrative is sharp, concise and no-nonsense, taking the reader instantly into a nightmare situation that is all too human in its concept. What would you do, reader, if you woke up and everyday was the same for a week then...everything started fresh...but it didn't. We get to see pathos in the very second chapter when one of the people you attach yourself to goes missing. Brilliant writing here. Please give this story a chance. I'm sensing the writer is frustrated that no one is noting his efforts which are, in effect, beyond limits. If you like sci-fi...if you like human stories with characters you can relate to...if you just want to help solve an unsolvable mystery? This story is a must read. I'm not joking here. Only two chapters are up. See if it doesn't hook your butt in like it did mine. We have to encourage someone with this much talent and imagination...."

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