What is your opinion?
Absolutely recommend this
"I absolutely loved this story,the writing was complex,deep into the emotions of the characters,the way the author describes every scene takes you on an emotional rollercoaster,i was there along the characters through it all. Such a beautiful story"
Nice story.
"I enjoyed reading the story and it was nice and enjoyable. But the writing style needs a bit of an adjustment in the sense that. When a scene finishes, you add a line of asterisks or a space or two so we readers will know that the next line will be another scene. I remember in the chapter of when Matteo confronted Koll to leave the party. After the celebration, on the next paragraph, the story didn't indicate something like a title that says "The next morning" or something like this "--------------------" after the last sentence. The story continued immediately that "Matteo wakes up with a leg tangled on him". It made me confused in many chapters in this story. But all in all, the story is nice."
