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Give me Pierce

"Call me Bobet the builder "

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Great story

"I love this story! It's not quite a bully to lovers tripe, but it's great! The ML and FL are in orbit around each other for a long time, him in lust and regret, her in anger and longing. When they finally come together, the fireworks are phenomenal. There are some minor spelling / grammar issues but they don't negatively impact the story over all. "Dirt blond hair" instead of "dirty blond hair" is a common one in this story. An extra letter here or there (coffeee for example) or the wrong "there." Minor issues in an otherwise great read!! "

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Love love love

"Loved every min of this book"

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Love this!

"I knew he liked her! He tried to play it off with his boys because he didn’t want them to know he actually has feelings for her."

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Me gusta

"Me gusta ma historia. "

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