What is your opinion?
Gripping Slow-Burn That Keeps You Hooked!
"I've made it up to Chapter 13 so far, and I am completely hooked! The story dives straight into high-stakes military romantic suspense, following Dmitry Mikhailov as he returns from captivity and struggles to adapt to life in Moscow. Also, the author/writer I think does an incredible job with the sensory details - from the weight of Dmitry's plate carrier and his AK-12 tapping against his chest to the deep psychological scars of war he carries. Watching him navigate military secrets, shifting loyalties and his intense, slow-burn connection with Polina makes for a great read. I can't wait for the author to upload the rest of the chapters - I highly recommend :-) please keep going! (also, it's only showing I read 4 chapters which is annoying thanks to Inkitt systems that moves a little slow to actually reflect the correct number of chapters you read)."
Very well done!
"I'm up to Chapter 8 and stopped to leave a review! I really like the story, especially your main character of Dmitry. He exudes a quiet strength that I enjoy."
When Ghosts Return
"A very compelling story, and great writing skills. Love the use of showing us the readers/audience and not telling us. It helps us to connect to the characters and story. The imagery and descriptions helps us place ourselves right there with the main character. I can't wait to keep reading more. The further I read, the deeper I get invested. The writer provides such great imagery, really incorporating us the readers and audience to give us that feeling as if we are right there with the characters. Very inclusive. "
Dear Neon, I’m really enjoying your story!
"My English is a bit limited, so I’ve only managed to read a few chapters so far, but I am already hooked. I haven't read much military fiction before, but your writing is so detailed and immersive that I feel as if I’m stepping into the military base right alongside Dmitry. I am very much looking forward to reading more. I’ll be following your updates! "
intrigued
"I useually pass on stories dealing with war related stuff. But I really and honestly became intrigued by the prologue and the chapter that I have read so far. The story has scope, depth and very good pacing. I look forward to reading more as soon as I can do so. I'm honestly gripped."
Intriguing
"I must admit at first I didn’t like the storyline being a romance person and all but the second chapter caught my eye and before I knew it I was obsessed. The writer has a unique style of storytelling and writing. The plot is mature and the dialogue is fire. The characters are well written."
when the ghost return
"This book completely pulled me in from the very first chapter. The writing is smooth, the characters feel real, and every chapter leaves you wanting more. The emotions are beautifully portrayed, making it easy to connect with the characters and experience their journey alongside them."
I'm loving this story
"The characters are really great, and you can really feel the suspense and emotion, the author deserves praise, I'd really love to find out how this story ends."
Great story
"The story is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the plot keeps readers invested for the next chapter."
One of the Best Stories on Inkitt
"Thank you for reading When Ghosts Return. Every read, like, and comment means a lot to me. I'm grateful to everyone who's decided to follow Dmitry's journey. This story is a slow-burn military thriller with a strong psychological element, and I'm excited to share each new chapter with you. I hope you enjoy the ride, and I'd love to hear your thoughts as the story unfolds."
Great story so far
"The prose is beautiful and the plot and setting feels highly detailed and realistic."
Completely Hooked
"I'm absolutely in love with your book. The characters are incredible, and Dmitry and Polina are so beautiful together. I can't wait to read more chapters."
love this
"it's cover is beautiful and unique."
When Ghosts return
"I just started reading this book and have only read the first three chapters so far, but I'm already impressed. The way the u brings their imagination to life is really captivating. The story has made me curious about what happens next, and I'm excited to keep reading"
Review
"I read the prolog and chapter 1, I noticed some strong errors. Especially with the time inconsistencies, even starting chapter 2. The diologue seems a bit rushed and jagged, the jagged part is understand for military but the rushed-Ness of it makes it hard to understand for anyone, specially readers like myself who dont have a ton of background knowledge with military or more plot related Russian military. I think some areas could use more descriptions, like the hall scene, at first its in a hallway then in a stair well. I do think you have a compelling story but the way you introduce the characters and areas are lackluster. I do want to say tho your writing is very good and I look forward to seeing this revised in the future. Im sure it'll make for a great read."
I really enjoyed it!
"Such a good read! The writing is engaging, the characters are lovable, and the story kept me hooked from start 😊"
Very original
"From the chapters that are already available, it's clear that it's a very well-thought-out idea by the author. Very original."
