Good. Needs Work.

"The author is very good, but in desperate need of a decent editor. There are too many redundant repetitions throughout the book and in every chapter; and the dialogue is unrealistically technical in too many scenes. The inconsistency in information conveyance and use at the beginning of the book is also confusion and mildly disconcerting. These make it difficult to read. I'm pushing myself to finish reading the book as it were. A good editor can certainly turn this into a master piece. "