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Impatient

"The story is soo good!! Please finish the book! I can't wait to read how this story will continue.🥰"

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Valentina s story

"The character's are awesome. I am looking forward to continuing to read this story. The thrill is awesome. "

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Wow loving this book so far

"OMG I’m obsessed with this book 🫣.... The emotions feel real, the sex is great. I’m up to chapter 18 so far, and I’m loving Val, she’s kind, has a heart of gold, a bit naïve but she’s strong ...not easy walking away from someone you love. I can see myself a little in her, We’re also determined. I’m feeling every emotion, every moment. Amazing writing, I can’t wait to read the rest. I’m hoping there will be more updates by the time I catch up. "

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Chapter 73

"Aww lovely, they’re gonna see were this leads to. And I can’t wait. "

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Everything about this book is impeccable! The storyline is awesome.. ant wait to read more.. the author has nailed the plot.. if I could give more than 5 stars I would!

"Everything about this book is impeccable.. the storyline could not be better.. I wish I could give more than 5 stars.. the author deserves a round of applause 👏 "

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Keeping on toes

"Compelling plots and story line"

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I dont want to wait to continue reading

"I am very into the book. I dont love the back and forth but I understand it and am getting used to it. I can't wait to read the rest. I hope shekels Nash where to stick it and ends up with Ethan"

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Valentina

"Where’s the rest?"

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So far so good

"enjoying it so far"

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Brokenhearted

"I’m liking the story. She’s talented and strong but she’s not superwoman as so many of these female characters become. I like that. She’s more real. At least so far. "

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Losing Valentina

"It was a big turn off, first I don't read stories about step brothers (foster brother is the same for me) specifically if they grow up together and they end up having sex, a big noooo. second the story is still stuck in the past on the 50th chapter, I believe the writer saw the story between Nash and Valentina then wanted him out completely, I can see how she dislikes his own character which is fine, every writer has the right to finish a story however they like, I don't think it will be between the characters she described on her main page. "

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Losing Valentina

"The title clearly says losing Valentina but honestly I thought Nash would have his redemption and get her back, he's still stuck on the past in the story, and yes as the writer keeps saying Ethan deserves her because he alwaysloved her, but he seems boring in my opinion. But in the description you're mentioning Nash only so I thought he was the main character not his now lover."

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CEO'S Regret

"The development is not what I expected, if in the main description said that she will get involved on a sex relationship with her foster brother I would have not read it at all. Not my kind of story, weird in my opinion 😅 yes I edited the review. "

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