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Surrendering is liberating

"The story was efficiently concise and deliciously effective. I felt the character’s longing, her submission to her owner, her surrender to his commands—and to her body’s demands. I felt the author’s own desires—perhaps memories—in the character’s ultimate release, albeit only fleeting, from the arousal that built throughout the workday. I can’t wait to read more from this author, and in doing so, to come to appreciate the author’s own journey. (pun intended)"

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