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What is your opinion?
Great start - can’t wait for more
"The characters are intriguing & the story is building nicely. I prefer to read completed stories as I am always impatient to know what happens next. This story has pulled me in & now I’m waiting for more. More please!"
I really enjoyed it.
"The characters have strong personalities, the plot keeps you interested, and the writing is excellent."
It's good. I liked it , I enjoyed writing it personally, the idea is taken from one of my dream. Which make it even more thriller more me
"Loved everything "
So far so good
"Plot hasnt fully revealed itself but so far it seems interesting. Good job on the conversations. Good character personalities. I like them all so far. I am stoked there are no AI cliques. Good start."
