First Glimpse

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Summary

Jake never expected a simple tap on the shoulder to change his life. A quiet university student who prefers rainy streets, old music, and his own company, Jake's world is turned upside down when he meets Evelyn—a girl with captivating eyes, a soothing voice, and secrets buried far beneath her smile. What begins as an innocent crush soon spirals into something far more complicated. After a devastating accident leaves Jake hospitalized, he finds himself pulled deeper into Evelyn's troubled world. Haunted by betrayal, heartbreak, and wounds no one can see, Evelyn begins slipping further away from everyone who cares about her. As relentless storms sweep across the city, Jake refuses to let her disappear. From hospital rooftops to deserted alleyways, from sleepless nights to desperate searches in the pouring rain, he risks everything to reach the girl who unknowingly became the center of his world. But saving someone isn't as simple as finding them. And sometimes the people we love the most are fighting battles we cannot see. A heartfelt story of first love, loss, healing, and the lengths one boy will go to save a girl who has already begun to lose herself.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Before Everything Changed

It was a normal day. Boring, ordinary — the kind of day that quietly drifts by without asking to be remembered.

I cruised through narrow alleyways on my skateboard, passing beneath old rusted pipes that carried the damp metallic smell of rain and age. Kate Bush played softly through my Walkman, her voice blending with the distant rumble of traffic as I made my way toward my evening class.

The weather was pleasant in a melancholic sort of way. Heavy gray clouds lingered above the city, threatening rain but never quite delivering it. Somewhere nearby, my neighbors were arguing again like it was part of their daily routine. Honestly, it was getting hard to tell whether their shouting annoyed me or comforted me.

Oh, right. I should probably introduce myself.

My name’s Jake. First-semester university student... though saying it out loud still feels strange. I love books, but somehow life never leaves enough time to actually read them anymore. I used to be good at sports too. Then adulthood showed up with its endless responsibilities and quietly stole all my free time.

But enough about me.

By the time I finished wandering through my own thoughts, I had already arrived at the university.

The place looked less like a campus and more like a giant concrete fortress built to imprison education itself. Massive hallways, towering staircases, endless empty spaces — and somehow, despite its size, barely any people. Maybe that’s why talking to others felt so difficult here.

Not that I was good at talking to people in the first place.

As I dragged myself up the dull staircase, the first bell rang sharply through the building. The sound echoed across the walls like a warning siren. I hurried through the crowded hallway searching for my classroom.

And miraculously... I found it without getting lost.

That alone felt like an achievement.

The classroom was enormous, lined with countless rows of seats stretching almost endlessly toward the back wall. The professor’s distorted voice crackled through the speakers, instructing everyone to settle down.

Naturally, I chose the back seat.

The back seat was safe. Quiet. Invisible.

I slipped into my chair and isolated myself from the rest of the class while students continued chatting around me. Their conversations blurred together into meaningless noise. Resting my head against the desk, I closed my eyes for what was supposed to be only a second.

Then suddenly-

A GENTLE HAND PATTED MY SHOULDER.

SPARKING A LIGHTNING THROUGH MY BODY, I WOKE UP AND TURNED AROUND.

THERE SHE WAS.

MY FIRST LOVE.

CALLING OUT TO ME...