Greetings and appreciation

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on instagram: eloi.se78319 "

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The Chronicler

"This novel really didn’t fail to meet my expectation in novels like this, and that is to bring me to another world . Even though a lot of people are bragging about your writing style .. still I had so many thrills reading this as it always make me feel excited and scared at the same time for what will happen next. That’s what adventures supposed to be. And just to mentioned this remind of the movie ink heart."

Amazing

"The writing style is purely amazing, if this was published I would buy it straight away. "

Beautiful

"This story is almost the epitome of a perfect story. The main character is perfectly crafted, with his own little flaws. Like everyone, the grammar and stuff can use work, but whatever. The writing style glows. If this were published, I would be first in line to buy a copy."

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The Chronicler

"His mother and him... should be: His mother and he..."

Interesting Concept...

"The beginning of this book pulled me in, but as it went on the long winded descriptions and lengthy transition scenes bored me. It takes a while getting to the point and makes you unsure if it was worth reading to get there. Aside from that, there are plenty of dialogue quotation errors that could be fixed by a good round of editing."