Out Of The Mouth Of Dialysis

"I really enjoyed this story, which was really well written. The character was unique, consistent, and cared a lot for his sister. I loved his relationship towards Orion and the general way he wanted to stand up to bad situations. I also loved the story's realism, although it had a few dark themes. There were a few more mistakes in chapter 3 than otherwise, but in general, this story was really nice. Well done!"