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Strong plot and great world building

"This is such a cool idea! Groundhogday meets The Matrix, but there's not enough words, in my opinion you could turn this into a spectacular novel if it was 5 or 6 times longer. That way the transition from one chapter to the next would be smoother ❤️ all in all you have an amazing imagination, it's an amazing concept - I just want more of it 🙏"

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