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Pies, Pastries, and Problems

"This is a very unique presentation of a mafia romance. It is very suspenseful but reveals emotions, danger, and love while never really saying what actually is going on. The introduction of poetic use of symbolic things such as tarot cards , gems, runes, etc at the beginning of each chapter creates a mysterious atmosphere. The end of each chapter is a heart felt prayer emphasizing the danger and love of the main characters. BRILLIANT WRITING! This is a keeper. "

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