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Love and betrayal

"Everything Nice "

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Nice

"I really like thiw book and i really anticipate for a happy ending"

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I like the way males softens when he sees Lillian

"I like everything about this book and the way Malek protects Lillian i just hate Jessica i don't want her to come between them"

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sold to the Alpha of darkness

"I couldn't put this book down. The build of the characters was great. Watching Lilian grow and flourish with Malek by her side. How do I read MORE"

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It make me read continuously

"I like this story has everything like action drama romance I mean too much romance and also the thrill . I love to read it. It's very interesting. 😍 🔥"

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Okurr

"Kinda cooked with this one ngl"

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Great book so far

"I like the story and how he’s teaching her slowly "

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Dieing for next chapter

"Im in love with the relationship between the two main characters amd you have them written so nicely everything flows well and the relationship between them is different than alot of the books ive read which is a breath of fresh air."

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I’m obsessed

"Everything about this novel is awesome. I’m absolutely dying for the next chapters!"

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Sold To the Alpha of Darkness

"I love the story line. Can't wait to read how this ends! Really hope that she gives birth.... "

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Sold to The Alfa of Darkness

"You have me checking back every day for updates!! This story may be one of my favorite reads so far on here!"

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Loved it!

"-The writing flowed smoothly and coherently. -The smut had me so absorbed that when I snapped back to reality I felt so dirty I needed a shower. -There's some plot"

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Rebirth

"There is love between Lillian and Malek but no one knows how to communicate. Story line flows well with twists along the way. Malek is going on an uphill battle with Lillian. He never had to actually face a woman who he truly cared about but didn't know how to express those feelings to "

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Sold to the alpha of darkness

"Great book. Good read"

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Goid

"I like the story. Unfortunately, the end is missing."

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Sold to the Alpha of darkness

"I chose a high rating because the story, it's dialog and it's author deserve it. It's refreshing to read a book with a great story line and grammar."

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Quinny

"I like the plot and the pace so far, i like the tension of knowing that there is more to come a tip of the vail is lifted. The story is not endlessly reapiting itsself."

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Review

"Very interesting novel. I'm enjoying the plot so well. I'm hoping for more drama and action. We'll done to our author"

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Great

"Great story line, very exciting and interesting "

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Spicy love story

"Compelling love story with steamy love scenes! I’m loving how Lillian innocently can shake Malek’s control. I can’t wait for her family who mistreated and stole from her up get their punishment. This will be interesting how Malek will make them pay. I love Joe they are both falling gif each other."

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