Great story
"Looking forward to a follow on story. Too many places plot is left open"
- Évaluation globale
- Intrigue
- Style d'écriture
- Grammaire et ponctuation


"Looking forward to a follow on story. Too many places plot is left open"
"I enjoy reading it...not too blunt erotic vulgar or anything just niceeee to read and create the image in mind 😁👌🏻🫰🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻"
" Enjoying the characters! It needs a little more proof reading. "
"I've seen worse grammar. But still a page turner. "
"So far it is good, characters are strong and growing. "
"Fabulous story. Been really enjoying everything about it."
"I disliked the errors because sometimes the book is hard to read. It is a good story line just the miss takes add up to 30+"
"It is entertaining and fun. I like it. The spelling and grammar are off at times but I understand what was intended. It's romantic and a good read. "
"So far so good. Reads well and doesn't repeat itself continuously. Looking forward to see how it progresses "
"Good start, interested to read a conclusion as the story feels like it has barely started. "