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What is your opinion?
teh story
"the story was very good big,curious,and more wish to read this further and more sceneces very good overall"
Peak
"The dialogue with his mom feels a little dragged out for me But yeah it's alright people have different attention span The writing is peak A request the dynamic between the mc and the girl you shouldn't rush it Everything else is peak I like how you wrote it Photo sensitive, Asian mother That's all keep going [Sleepy]"
