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Amazing plot!

"Update please.... "

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Digging it so far.

"I like the way the story is going and the strength of the fmc. I hope she does not have a rude awakening coming. I hope he has to grovel about something at some point. His authority and resolute superiority come through the page. I understand it. I don't generally like anyone with a superiority complex, however it is standard for an alpha, of course!"

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