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An ongoing collections of mostly free-style poems I write. They're not high-quality or anything. More just thoughts and observations in my life.
Rows, straight and even
Barely enough space
Just enough space
Is not this man-made abomination
Considered a forest, rather
Or do they grow like students
Rows, straight and even
Desks, with just enough space
Barely enough space
Is this not a man-made abomination
Yet, who asks how the trees feel
Year after year they produce
Who thanks them for their yield
When they are purposely grown
Purposely placed
Rows, straight and even
Barely enough space
Just enough space
No thanks, only silence.
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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libaHuntJT9: With good plots n turns. Good rainy afternoon book.
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Sarah: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?
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S.F. Penny: I loved the slow build and even though there was no real fight that threatened their relationship, it was actually a refreshing break from other stories.
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Felicia: The story plot is good. It's an emotional novel, but all's well that ends well :)
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Leppo Ciappo: Good story. I appreciate the development of the characters.
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Alicia: Love this read, easy, doesn’t drag on and super sweet
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Sheri: Love the plot, interesting characters and growth shown. Many different subplots add interest. Grammar and syntax indicate possible non English writer.
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