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The Iceman's Lament

"Interesting story. I was glued to my seat as I read it was one of those what's going to happen next type stories. And I definitely wanted to know "

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The Iceman's Lament

"This was interesting. Slow beginning but it builds in tense and mystery. I liked the way other planets secretly combat invasive visitors. Never thought about that before. Liked the winter scenery."

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A really great read

"The Iceman's Lament is a good solid science fiction story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I loved the tough-talking hardboiled characters, their lives on the harsh and unforgiving planet, the technologies needed for survival and the unknown mystery of the Lights. The plot was complicated enough to sustain the reader's interest. Each character seemed to have a dark or mysterious past, which worked well for this story. The mystery of the Lights was doled out slowly, and not so completely explained that it left no room for thought and wonder by the end. Another good call. I thought the descriptions of EVA activity, spacesuits and driving the ice-hauler were especially convincing and well-written. The realism served to heighten the sense of danger whenever characters were out on the surface. At times the action was really cinematic. I only had one minor niggle: It's clear that the planet Phoedrus orbits another star in our galaxy, but the main character, Tom, seems at one point to think they are 30 million miles (later 20 million miles) from Earth. Most hard-SF readers would realise that 20 or 30 million miles would not even get you out of the inner solar system. Perhaps the author meant 30 light-years, which would allow Phoedrus to orbit any of 18 stars within that distance (and which are actually known to have at least 7 planets). Not a serious enough error to ruin the story, but a distracting annoyance to nerds like me. Overall, a really good read and highly recommended. "

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Well done

"Original roo lot of stories here are little girl romance dribble or stale galactic empire yawns. "

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Very enjoyable story. Well written.

"All 5 stars. The main character is very likeable; a big heart in a hard body. I am from the Netherlands my writing-English maybe different. The writing and grammer is good. It is easy to read and I did not see any mistakes. The plot is intriguing. I realy liked the story and want to recommend it wholeheartedly. "

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The Iceman's Lament

"Really enjoyed this very high standard of writing."

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Good book

"Good action. Only thing I don't like is interruption for review and you gotta make it a long review or else it keeps bugging you. Don't like review. I like the book."

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Sucked me in.

"Intriguing story. "

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Great Fun

"Easy quick read. Very entertaining. Looking forward to his next installment."

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The Iceman's Lament

"If you enjoyed The Phoedrus Elevator you will love this. (If you haven't read The Phoedrus Elevator, then please do - it is brilliant and provides the full back story to Tom Kelly). Neither a sequel or a prequel - more of a mid-quel. The action starts quickly and you are soon caught up in the world of Eleanor Station. My only criticism was that it was over too soon. Can't wait for the next installment!"

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The Iceman’s Lament

"Great book!!!! Intriguing near future science fiction story with great characters and narrative. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was a real page turner and a fun ride all the way through. I can’t wait for the sequel. I would be a great series."

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A walk in Zero gravity

"John Kilkelly’s writing is always entertaining and his colorful commentary is sure to bring a blush to your cheeks. I am looking forward to future works from this talented writer 👍👍 Obligatory extra words to meet some Minimum word. "

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Iceman's Lament - Review

"Wow! Asimov quality John. I sat and read this for pure enjoyment with not a thought of criticism. Reminded me of one of my own but mine is nowhere near the quality of this. Superb job. No superlative is too excessive. Good luck with finishing it."

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Good job!

"A good story, the writing style gripping me and keeping me reading. Descriptions omitting enough to make it easy for my brain to fill the gaps with its own pictures. Well done! "

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Good story.

"I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you!"

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