What is your opinion?
Love your mind set and story plot!!!
"I love the creativity and depth of your story and writing style!! Please continue writing within this Novels story, it's Too Good To Come To An End So Quickly!! I'm captivated and consumed when reading it, I can't wait to continue.... :)"
Hooked
"Hooked is really all that I can say. This book is too good. I literally had to just sit down and finish it in one sitting because it really drew in my attention. I cannot wait to keep reading as it updates."
Pulled in from the start
"A shifter story with a unique twist, hellhounds with ruin. Was pulled in right from the start and am loving the story."
Addictive
"Absolutely hooking, could not stop myself from binging this book. Never a dull moment with this one"
Love this book!!
"I absolutely love your writing. I cant wait for the next update! I usually wait until a book is completed before I binge it but I couldnt, its just too good! I look forward to reading more of your work. I feel like a fly on the wall watching it all play out when im reading your book"
OBSESSED!!!!
"Absolutely love this story can't wait for more "
Hooked!
"I just love this storyline! I can’t wait to find out what happens next. "
Great
"Really good writing and ideas, completely has me hooked"
Rocky start, uneven execution.
"Couldn't make it past chapter one, unfortunately. The opening has real potential - a massacre survivor crawling to safety is a strong hook - but the delivery leans too hard on one-line sentence fragments for effect, which gets tiring fast when it's the primary tool instead of the occasional one. There's also a tonal whiplash between the trauma on the page and the offhand jokes in the author's notes right after, which made it hard to stay grounded in the character's pain. Some solid physical writing in the fall-down-the-stairs scene, but a lot of emotional beats ("Ruin. It stirs, restless and dangerous.") tell rather than show. Needs a tighter edit pass on cliches ("staring into the sun," "firm, unyielding") and more trust in the reader to feel tension without a fragment announcing it."
