Great plot!

"I feel that maybe taking the time to explain Miles to such a degree is important to the story but by the time they leave Maggie’s the reader should be aware. It doesn’t take that much detail and causes a lull in the storyline. Don’t get me wrong. I love Miles and Declan but at this point I would like to hear more about how Declan is truly interpreting Miles even if he doesn’t speak about it. "