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Great short

"Accomplished everything it set out to do in less then 100 pages without sacrificing any of the emotions needed to tell this story. Short story at it's best "

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Emotional and heartbreaking

"A touching story about two brothers dealing with guilt, pain, and forgiveness. The relationship between them is the highlight, with plenty of emotional moments and some surprising twists along the way. The ending is heartbreaking but meaningful, making this a memorable read from start to finish."

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