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Short but sweet
"Finally Alexander loves Clara. It took him long enough to realize that if he did open his heart and love her back he would be one lonely rich man. Thank you "
Well written
"This was a heartbreaking love story. The FMC's personal growth and the emotional impact it has on the MMC is devastating."
Note to the author
"There are inconsistencies you need to address. She was introduced to us in a classroom setting at an elementary school implying she's a teacher, then later she didn't have a job and she was being encouraged to give teaching a chance which she reacted like she was surprised to hear such recommendation. He was introduced as Alexander Graves, then he was referred to as Alexander Voss. "
