What is your opinion?
Absolutely mesmerizing start!
"Wow, what an incredible and captivating first chapter! The writing style is deeply atmospheric and highly engaging from the very first sentence. Father Gianluca is an incredibly intriguing character, and the tension built inside the confessional is perfectly executed. The balance between faith, human nature, and psychological depth is brilliant. It’s a very smart, dark, and sophisticated start to a thriller. 5 stars all the way, I highly recommend it!"
Great work
"This story has been a really enjoyable read so far. The author does a great job of pulling you into the world from the very beginning, and each chapter leaves you curious about what will happen next. The pacing keeps things interesting, and the characters feel distinct enough that it's easy to become invested in their journey. One thing I especially liked was how the emotional moments were handled. They felt genuine without being overly dramatic, and the interactions between the characters helped bring the story to life. The plot also has enough mystery and suspense to keep you turning the pages. There are a few grammar and formatting mistakes here and there, but they never took away from my enjoyment of the story. Those are things that can easily be polished during editing, while the creativity, imagination, and heart behind the writing are already there. Overall, this is a promising story with an engaging premise and plenty of potential. If you're looking for something entertaining with memorable characters and a plot that keeps you hooked, I definitely recommend giving it a chance. I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story next. Keep writing—you've created something worth reading!"
Hold My Cross For A Second
"I mean what a thought provoking, heart provoking, jaw dropping piece of literary work. I just read something never before written. Now it's not a romance story in my opinion. It is an erotic story based in the true taboo nature of erotica. Giving you true themes of sexual sin and lust even more so profound because of the religious themes. My question however is will every male be a member of the lbgtq+ community? I suppose even if the answer is yes. It stays on theme because it is sinners who are drawn to priests the most and in the context of Christianity sexual sin, murder and hatred are among our major crimes as humans. Nevertheless, bravo! "
Very Enticing Story so far!
"So I read the first 3 chapters, and I am utterly enamored. I was surprised by how profound the confessions in the opening were, as much as it was erotic and enticing! The writing style is very good too; there are no grammatical or punctuation errors. Would definitely read more! "
