What is your opinion?
Wonderful work....Almost
"So far this story is told quite well. Sometimes the back and forth banter gets a bit monotonous, but still punctual and funny at times. The author almost wants to convey a lot of witty dialog. Almost. (You'll get that later.) Waiting for the story to start getting very serious. And will keep reading avidly as new chapters are released. Im anticipating great things from this story. "
Super cute slow-burn with real emotional weight
"(I discovered this story originally on another site, but saw the author's note about it being available here in a potentially more complete version). I really love this story. The world-building feels great - it doesn't just sit in the background, it actually shapes what the characters are going through. The cast is varied and funny, their personalities and interactions feel genuinely interesting: they aren't just one-dimensional. I especially love how supportive (and conspiring!) some of the side characters are when it comes to the protagonists' relationship. There's real emotional weight to many of the scenes and revelations, some of which genuinely surprised me. Just as importantly, there are plenty of light-hearted and super cute moments to balance it out. Most of all, I love the interactions between the two protagonists and their slowly developing relationship. It feels real, genuine and vulnerable. One tiny thing: there are a few phrases that pop up a lot across chapters. It's minor and might just be the author's style, but varying them a bit could add some polish. Anyways, really fun read with great characters and a sickeningly sweet (in a good way!) romance. EDIT: I'm not sure why the reviews say I have "0 chapters read", but I'm up-to-date and on the latest chapter (113: The Courier Queen)."
Love the plot
"I like the story line and the playful banter between the characters. I like that you can feel some scenes and how important that part to a character. I like that in some scenes you can tell that the right thing to do doesn't always feel right, you had to do them anyway."
Recommend
"I love the way the author writes the dialogue in short sentences and you can feel the witt of the characters through such short witty responses. Personally love the progress of the story as well as development of characters. 10/10 "
excellent read so far
"excellent read so far cant wait to see how the story progresses though i wish the sexual tension was turned up just a little 🤭"
