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Brilliant Premise

"So begins an exceptionally imaginative fantasy that immediately captivates readers with its unique premise. The story follows sixteen-year-old Aislinn Enid, whose ordinary life unravels when a glowing envelope arrives to declare she has been forgotten by the world. Driven by excellent writing and immersive descriptions, the narrative pulls you right into her mysterious journey to the Mystic Academy for the Forgotten. The high stakes and intriguing sense of momentum make it a truly unforgettable page-turner from the very first chapter. Ultimately, this spellbinding novel leaves a lasting impression, making it an absolute must-read for fantasy fans. I can't wait to push forward into this."

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"This? This has a *really* strong opening, definitely. The various teenagers that have been transported, and the method of making everyone forget them so they can learn in peace? *Inspired*. A genuine stroke of genius. You were right to question the romantasy angle; I get the feeling it would in fact overpower this incredibly strong premise you've got going on. It's up to you how you play it, whether you let them have those moments, or save it for a separate story...? Either way, I want to get invested in Ash's world, absolutely, 100% no question. Loved it! I can't wait until you're ready to take it out of drafts! ❤️ ✨ "

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Please don't let this story be forgotten!

"OMG, it is not often that I read a novel that hooks me as much as this one did. I was locked in from the title, cover, description, and the first chapter. I absolutely love the premise of this book and it is so unique and tantalizing. The writing is excellent and the descriptions are beautiful and the picture is so immersive. I'm already a fan of this book after one chapter and sincerely can't wait to read the rest. "

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